Wednesday, June 25, 2014

Wednesday Writings (Senses-Sight)-Anna

Hey everyone, I guess it's been awhile since you've seen a wednesday writing. But other than that here's week two of my Senses Series.  You can find week two here.

I will be doing practically the same thing as last time only adding adjectives for sight.  I will give an example for a simple sentence and then build onto that.  This time I will give you two examples since I skipped two weeks.

Here's the first example-

-          Kathryn watched a bird fly across the sky.

What kind of bird? What color was the sky? Was it in the evening or was it in the middle of the day?  Was it raining?

Here's what I put together after adding a few adjectives to describe the sentence.

-          Kathryn watched the bluebird fly across the colorful morning sky.

After missing two weeks I will do another example.

-          I watched the construction workers.

Think about how long they were there. What were they working on?

-          I watched the tired construction workers work on a new road.

If you have any suggestions for next weeks post leave it in the comments below.  I will be doing smell next.  Have a great day!



  1. Very helpful, Anna! Thank you so much. I will definitely use this in the novel I am writing!

    1. You're welcome, I'm glad I'm influencing people to use it in their writing :)


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