Thursday, July 3, 2014

Wednesday Writings (Senses-Taste)-Anna

Hey everyone, Anna here again.  This is week four of Wednesday Writings, and week three of my Senses series.  Sorry this post is a little late, I’ll be honest, I completely forgot.

Like the last two posts, I am going to give an example of weak sentences without senses; this week is taste.  After the example I will ask a few questions about describing the nouns (people/place/thing).  Then, I will rewrite the sentence before and add a few adjectives to make the sentence more “advanced”.

Here’s the Example:

Georgia reached for the watermelon and took a bite.

Was the watermelon seedless?  Was it a bright red or darker?  Was it juicy? Was it soft or crunchy?

Now let’s see what I can do with adding a few adjectives.

Georgia reached for the bright watermelon and took a bite into the juicy fruit.

Please leave a comment and a suggestion for next weeks post.  I will be doing the sense of hearing. Otherwise I’m always open for suggestions.



  1. You should do something with birds chirping :)

    1. I like that idea, I'll think about that. Thanks.


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